I need my father

I spent my whole day trying to write an article about how to get a refinance car loan. After I finished it, I gave it to my father because I needed him to tell me his opinion. Guess what? He hated it. He told me that next time I have to write something like this, I should talk to him first, and then start writing. He promised me that he would help me to rewrite this article, in order to be published.